All Comments on 'The Beat Pt. 05'

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HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 1 year ago

This is a real slow burner, and I'm enjoying it immensely. Your subtle hints early on that Sally might have a secret or two is a great plot device for driving this story on. And now that we know that mother and daughter have a taste for 'forbidden fruit' I for one can't wait to read how Mary and Sally come to terms with what has happened between them. 5 stars to add to your collection.

monasissymonasissyabout 1 year ago

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

AliceGeeAliceGeeabout 1 year ago

Yes! The storyline is going exactly the way I hoped it would. I am eager to find out how the Mary/Sally situation plays out, with mutual satisfaction I hope. Plus we now have Sally's mature lover to add to the mix. So I'm going to move on to Part 6 right away. Five stars yet again.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy3 months ago

Thats horrible for just being 18 and tricked into this sapphic incest act …. The burden weights on a young soul and if her mother gains knowledge everything may explodes into chaos ….. from a slow descending for mary and accepting, this can be the end in many different forms

ArkingArking3 months agoAuthor

@Franziska - The torment they must have inside of them. The love that a Mother and daughter share is boundless. It was just an innocent interaction, nothing planned, it just happened. How they deal with it from here will either tear them apart or bring them closer together.

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