All Comments on 'The Beat Pt. 06'

Your writing is so good. You engineered a potentially awkward situation in the last chapter and have begun to resolve it in this one. I can't wait for the next chapter! This gets 5 stars from me. Very well done.

Excellent, the potential for this story has no limits. I know where I want it to go but I'm have no idea how this wonderful story teller is going to juggle Mary with Sally and Beth, not to mention Sally with her mom and Jennifer. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Five stars.

Great story, Hopefully you will be able to continue after completion of Stella and Margarita.

Are you definitely sure a 18 year old can be that forward , so full of herself, so safe in offering the truth? ….. this might be turning into a nightmare if mary goes ballistic, but this would be destructive for the whole family then, so Sallys truthful act sounds like fitting but still creepy

And Jen should care for Sal a good deal

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