All Comments on 'The Caged Student Ch. 01'

Very good start!

I agree with my predecessor. This is really a very good start, very well written. But I can't see here any mind control. You may better put this into NonConsentual/Reluctance. That's a category that fits much better.

Anonymous - Not to give too much away, but the start is very subtle. As you get further into the story, I hope that things become more clear.