by KinkyEvie19
I like it so far! Keep up the good work!
I hope you might focus on his spit getting into her mouth, how it disgusts her, humiliates her.
Is her skin soft? Are her feet pretty or ticklish? What a wonderful new world of potential....
WTAF??! What a disappointment I was expecting BDSM not a kidnap/ rape / abuse story. Probably a good idea to change the story genre, calling it BDSM implies Safe, Sane and Consensual.
Tess (uk)