All Comments on 'The Discovery Ch. 02'

Great story I need more. Thanks.

@ Tim the cajun

I'm glad you are enjoying both chapters of this series thus far.

I will be submitting an edit of this chapter soon. There were some errors and stuff I felt needed to be fleshed out.

EVERYONE PLEASE TAKE THE TIME TO RATE EACH CHAPTER.

Rooting for the guy already. Looks like the makings of a interesting story.

I am happy that people are enjoying the story. That's why we write and post stories, in hopes that others will read and enjoy them. Since we don't get paid and either do the other members of this site. The best thing you can do for the writers is to rate their stories. I am waiting for some of the edits I've submitted to be taken care of before I submit anymore edits or chapters. I believe I will move this story to the "Novellas and Novels" section since it spans different categories.