by Br0kenD0ll
Your best work yet. Let him keep fucking them both, multiple pregnancies from each.
What a creep you are.
Dumb lines, almost on purpose it seems but no it's not lol. It's just bad.
While I'm not big into the non consensual part of the story, I have to admit the story is HOT! I had a chance to be a donor myself for a few same sex couples via AI, and the thought of NI with them is very arousing. You captured a lot of my thoughts in the first one. Keep writing!
There needs to be more, like they all in their own way fall in love with each other and become a family. one the desire to just love, the dominated and finally satisfied with just the two. The internal warfare of all three could make another 2 or3 stories. Great start.