All Comments on 'The Drive Back to Nashville'

Another whore Fucking a cop story from another desperate poster.

And you are going to be very sorry, because you lost a loving husband, home and the love and respect of your kids and mom and dad. But who cares, not you obviously.

But me wondering if she always cheats or does her husband care? Only background was her age, married, one kid.

Very disagreeable characters. Hard to be drawn into such low life scum.

I look forward to more tales of your slutty adventures

It's a good start sluttygirl2020. Would've liked it more if it was more detailed :)

Keep writing ;)

Going to add you in my favourites, will be waiting for your next story.

I'd suggest you to edit your profile. Mail me if you need any help. :)

So, are we to assume the cop turned off the dash cam in his car and or body cam as well so the little dalliance wasn't recorded. If he did then he's got some explaining to do to the shift supervisor when the logs get reviewed. "Well, gee Sarge, I was just getting a little Bush Bond from the lady."

It was a fun read. Just crazy fantasy. I liked it. Keep writing.

The story line is hot...4*, maybe 4.5. The quality of the writing, though, is around 2*. Some suggestions, if I may.

1) Ignore the trolls. They haunt this category, pouncing on anything that has to do with extramarital sex, even though that is in the description of LW. Don’t let them make you feel bad about your stories just because of their stories...being full of anger and hate from being hurt by their significant others...26thNC especially. That’s all that he does. Never writes a story... not even a BTB...just trolls.

2) Stay in one tense. The past tense works well when relating personal experiences. The present tense comes across too much as fantasy or wishful thinking.

3) Understand how to use punctuation, especially commas. Your story was a bit on the painful side to read because of your woeful lack of commas and misuse of apostrophes.

4) Check the proper spelling/usage of certain words. For example, when you can see something, it is a ‘sight’, not a ‘site’. A site is a location.

5) This site (not sight) has volunteer editors who can help you polish your story. You should seriously consider reaching out to them.

6) Keep writing. There are people out here that aren’t trolls, and who enjoy this type of literature. The more you write, the better you get...just like the more you run, the better you run. Work at it.

Good luck!

Read the story aloud and note the errors - like breast for breasts, etc. With familiar cities, you won't need the state as they are common knowlege.

Good story line. Check some of my favorites.

Write more, read 'em aloud, and run a spell/grammar check. You will get better and I certainly appreciate your effort!

Please let me know when you publish again. You will develop your style - just let your mind wander.

Pretty routine slut show

You're such a slut, must be in the breast size. 'B.s.' always like to fuck around. One nice cock at home is never enough. Thanks for the read.