All Comments on 'The ENF Catcher Pt. 16'

Fascinating story. Has corporal punishment elements but none of the brutality and sadism that so many stories seem to descend into. I enjoyed it. But it does make me wonder what will become of Megan? How does she rebuild her life and what does she make of it? I would enjoy an epilogue, even if she just turns up as a side character in another story. Like you I had some comments from Tess (UK) in a few of my own stories and always found them well thought out and valuable. Either way, here's hoping you (and Tess) have a good festive season. All the best.

As I’ve said already, I enjoyed this tale. It was a fun read. The flashbacks and flashforwards got a little confusing at times but kept it interesting. I also liked the shorter than normal chapters. As someone who often loses focus this made for an easy read.