All Comments on 'The Family Pt. 01: Donna Ch. 03'

by fredStoner

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theboss762theboss762over 1 year ago

I wish you wrote Chris a little more realistically and not like a brainless NPC. Fun series to read nobetheless

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Hopefully the next episode arrives sooner than this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please consider doing an albino teen girl in a future story even if she isn't the main character! I'm obsessed with albino girls like Nienke "Iana" Meijer from Rainbow Six or real model Nastya Zhidkova. Regardless I love your stuff and hope you keep at it! The scenarios you come up with are insane.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ralph is back!

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