All Comments on 'The Girlfriend Experience Ch. 15'

I liked this chapter but the 5 month time jump needs some more filling out in my opinion. Last episode our main character was halfway through a party and now she no longer even works at the ranch.

The story takes place over a three year time span. The jump was necessary and more will follow.

Keep it going. Thank you

Comment, Part 2 (hit return by accident)

I agree with MikeMan that the time jump has left a lot of gaps. I suggest the the back stories need filling in but when it fits. We don't know how Lindsay went from Sammy to Mike, for example. If she isn't going to feature again, a simple sentence would do it. If she remains part of the story, the gap can be filled in on her return.

Great story!

If you recall, at the end of chapter 14, it was noted as the end of "Book One". This chapter going forward is "Book Two". It is more or less a sequel, another reason for the time jump. Backstories and whatnot will be taken care of in due time ... all I ask is that everyone has a little patience.

As I said earlier, this story takes place over a three year time period so there will be other jumps from time to time as well. Hopefully, everything makes sense in the end.

I am enjoying this series. Please continue.

Really enjoy this series and hope to read more along with Lindsay and Mikes next adventures. Great writer.

Sammy's real name is MIKE