All Comments on 'The Hired Gun Ch. 02'

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tailtale13tailtale13about 1 year ago

I don’t know how I feel about this chapter, to be honest, Esther is one of my favorite characters, because although there were only a few sex scenes with her, it seemed to me that she and the main character have a special chemistry. In addition, she is the only woman who did not hurt the main character and did not create any problems for him at all. And here she utters a phrase about the fact that sex with Andre was the best in recent times. Maybe I'm too sentimental about this, or most likely the author described the sex scenes between her and the main character so that they sunk into my soul. I had a similar experience when Rashida called another man "Daddy". It seems that you understand that this is just sex, but it’s somehow bitter at heart and the impression is that everything will no longer be the same as before in their relationship. But the quality of the chapter, as always, is on top, I recently started reading your works from the very first and you have just amazing growth in writing skills throughout your works.

TerraKhanTerraKhanabout 1 year ago

Nice one as usual, not going to lie I "love" auntie Esther's sex scene, it hilarious and hot at the same time.

I would like to see more of her, she's always fun to read.

By the way, what's up with the thick bitches at the park, are they the "hired guns.?" Inquiring minds would like to know.

OgbaNcha1OgbaNcha1about 1 year ago

I love Esther scenes and her mouth. Has me reading in what I think is a Southern American accent (I'm West African) 😄. I was also jealous about Andre and Esther though.

More of this please. Thank you! 🙌🏾

OgbaNcha1OgbaNcha1about 1 year ago

Also what @tailtale13 said. Unless size matters more than skill hehehe.

Looking forward to unravelling the curvy athletes.

tailtale13tailtale13about 1 year ago

OgbaNcha1_It didn't make me uncomfortable because auntie Esther chose "big dick" over the protagonist's "technique". It just seems to me that she evaluates very superficially, because the main character gave her not only good sex, but "intimacy" or something. I just expected something more from her. Well, here I made up a story for myself and I myself got upset because it does not correspond to reality). I just like the scenes between the main character and auntie Esther more than between her and Andre.

gydeongydeonabout 1 year ago

Another great chapter with the MC and Ester. The one thing I learned about the women the MC have sexual encounters with. the women doesn’t have any loyalty to him. No matter what the chemistry is between them even Rashida loyalty is questionable. It’s not surprising to see Ester do the same thing when she is already cheating on her husband. Regardless if she or the husband may have started first. From what I see the MC is being used to get her bag up just in case when things go bad with her husband. That situation is a ticking time bomb waiting to explode.

Seem like Mr. 3000 is back. Can’t wait to see him as the new hired gun.

Rubbing my hands together for the chicks in the park. A mystery I can’t wait to be unraveled.

mondotokenmondotokenabout 1 year agoAuthor

by gydeon on 2 hours ago

Another great chapter with the MC and Ester. The one thing I learned about the women the MC have sexual encounters with. the women doesn’t have any loyalty to him. No matter what the chemistry is between them even Rashida loyalty is questionable. It’s not surprising to see Ester do the same thing when she is already cheating on her husband. Regardless if she or the husband may have started first. From what I see the MC is being used to get her bag up just in case when things go bad with her husband. That situation is a ticking time bomb waiting to explode.

Seem like Mr. 3000 is back. Can’t wait to see him as the new hired gun.

Rubbing my hands together for the chicks in the park. A mystery I can’t wait to be unraveled.

ANSWER: What mystery? LOL!!!

gydeongydeonabout 1 year ago

@Mondotoken mystery of the unknown chick in the park. I can't wait to she really get revealed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Any videos like this content or is MC truly living in a fantasy world?

mondotokenmondotokenabout 1 year agoAuthor

Anonymousabout 11 hours ago

Any videos like this content or is MC truly living in a fantasy world?

Author: I don't understand the question.

OgbaNcha1OgbaNcha1about 1 year ago

@tailtale13 Everything you said is how I felt. The comment about size is my own aside, not related to your comment. I find myself being a bit protective/territorial with the main character especially for certain partners like Rashida, Phoebe and Aunty Esther. And especially as Esther was not part of his racket...was hoping it would be their own private thing when she wasn't fucking her Sheik. Oh well, all decisions lie in the able hands of the Creator Mondo. 🙌🏾

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Was asking if there’s videos online similar to what the MC makes in your writing while making a joke about it. MC living in fantasy world meaning the stuff he posts isn’t something you could actually find irl.

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