All Comments on 'The Homecoming'

by ajds69

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyabout 13 years ago
nice

a tad quick but very nice

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Spellcheck!

Nice story, but it's waist (person's midsection) not waste (garbage) - such picky things as this can really sour the mood you've worked so hard to create!

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