All Comments on 'The Honeymoon Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
This is EROTIC?

Not to this brain----THANK GOD

misterbonemisterbonealmost 15 years ago
Please take your time

While this story is far from being original, the basic ideas are OK, but why do you have to go so fast. This type of story should have at least 2 to 3 chapters.

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