All Comments on 'The Hotel Bar'

Not a bad little story for the exhibitionists, voyeurs category but it sadly needs editing to make sense. try reading your story over a few times and picking out the poor areas, then have someone else read it over to see if it makes sense to them. Just a three for now

You are definitely right: no question.

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