All Comments on 'The Hotwife & Her Bull - Pt. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Too funny for words! Every time you mention "bull" all I see is a giant cow out in the field with a ring thru his nose. Dumber than all git out. NEVER continue.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 1 year ago

Why stay married? You never answer that question: why not just get a divorce and be single since that’s how she’s acting?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"You can guess what happens in Chapter 12"...more shit?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No, it doesn't make sense to put this bullshit (pun intended) in Loving Wives.

Ridiculous69Ridiculous69about 1 year ago

You are so happy to make your husband character a true pervert and loser. He has no qualities of a man and is so sick and stupid it’s laughable. Your constant promotion of hot wife (whore) nonsense boarders in being just idiotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"...Alan is aroused by the idea of his wife having sex with other men, so he suggests she become a Hotwife and start a relationship with a man who can serve as her Bull. In Chapter 11 Carol indulges in public nudity. ...could categorize this ... as voyeurism/exhibitionism, ... overall this series makes the most sense in the erotic coupling or loving wives categories." -- Actually it makes the least sense in Loving Wives but that hasn't stopped the numbheads of literary lampoon from putting their schmutz here anyway. No problem, stories like this give plenty of practice for critical critique and ribald roasting. That they could possibly rate higher placed in a more suitable category doesn't impede our glee and enthusiasm in performing the falling star maneuver. This is a little known act by a 'would be author' emulating the losing commander who falls on his own sword.-- 1☆

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

Why take livestock with you to Paris.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes my wife was hot but I threw her into our swimming pool and the water was cold. O her bull I kicked him in the nuts several times. After he attack me and yes I had witnesses. You see I was warned about her black coworker Darell was going to make me a cuckold. Well it didn't work out the way he expected. Lol another dumbass.

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I worked as a professional writer and editor for many years. But I published fiction when I was younger, and I've had a longstanding interest in resuming.