All Comments on 'The Milking Imarbitarian Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Someone who has been kidnapped, shaved, stripped and secured doesn't just do what they're told, answer personal questions and go along with this strange scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

MC too compliant for a good story. Sorry, only 2 stars

IncubusStoriesIncubusStoriesover 1 year agoAuthor

For those complaining about the MC being too compliant, it makes a lot of sense and I’ll keep this in mind for further chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, I like this one better than the "Prison of Pain". There is a touch of realism but no pain so far. There is dialog of concern or care from the woman. She gives him a robe and allows him to wash with a bit of privacy. We may find more sadistic cruelty later but this starts off much better than the prison pain story.

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Hi, my name’s Rhys and I produce new short stories every week specialising in gay and femdom. I also write series. I’m not picky in my subject as long as a male sub is involved.

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