All Comments on 'The Missed Date'

Cheating a bit, but this is my first story and is one of a story arc of five, so any an all feedback is welcomed: Including "What a load of Rubbish!" and "I mean that most sincerely - I really do!"

typos need attention :)

well, now that you mention it, kinda of is a load of rubbish. I wouldn't want to even know any of the characters in this story, much less be friends, or heaven forbid, in a relationship with them. Assholes, one and all.

Reply to Anonymous: thanks for the comment on typos. I (and Word) have tried my best and without any specific pointers, the only way I could detect any misspellings was by switching to English (United States) from English (United Kingdom). Malaprops, where / were etc. are harder to spot (even for Word) and I would welcome a reader of my work before I pubish part three. If you are interested (or anyone) use the [ SEND PRIVATE FEEDBACK ] and possibly we can work together - confidentially assured.

i didnt notice Dan ever fucking her. Is this part of the story?

Anonymous3, sorry for the late response.

Well spotted! :-D

I wonder if Carol noticed...;-)

See part 3 'The Missing Person' to find out. Due this weekend.

Dressed so sexely she bailed on a date to be enjoy as a meat lovers. Dan you forgot to have a good time, I'm knocking on her door