All Comments on 'The Shanghai bussiness'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story could be hot, but it is difficult to read, because the grammar and wording are so poor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Get an editor and don't bother with a part two.

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