The Sky Kingdom Ch. 21

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onecuriousreaderonecuriousreader9 months ago

a slave master, who doesnt want to be a slave master, yet enjoys acting as a slave master.. at this point, im developing hope of a role reversal, where scarlet becomes the master, and this boy child becomes the slave.. because honestly, he is pathetic..

nthusiasticnthusiastic9 months ago

It’s funny how true to life Harry is, like most men. He’s absolutely oblivious to the concept of listening to and comprehending his lovely ladies. Like most people, not just men, he’s good at hearing what he wants to hear rather than what they’re trying to say. He doesn’t respect their choices or desires, only his own. He does what he wants and gives them what he wants to give them, regardless of their wishes, patting himself on his back for taking such good care of his slaves. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

TangledUpInYou2TangledUpInYou212 months ago

Well, I've binged all the installments of this and now there's nothing to do but keep my fingers crossed the author keeps writing and doesn't condemn this story to remain half finished eternally. While I do find Harry to be a bit annoying with all the waffling between wanting to have his slaves and wishing they were still high class ladies, the indecisiveness kind of makes the character feel a but more real for me. The women are equally frustrating in that they sometimes embrace their subjugation and sometimes act as though they haven't been trained and living as slaves for a while already. I also wish they all had a bit more in the personality department but on the whole I've found the story entertaining enough that I read thru all the chapters in a day. Please do keep up the good work and for the love of God please don't ruin it with any cringey mother/son incest once they get to her estate!

Mina_Mina_12 months ago

Please continue! You are a fabulous storyteller.

PrinceBabylonPrinceBabylon12 months ago

I love BDSM fairy tales and I read your story with great pleasure. Your story line is well planned and the characters are more credible than in most other BDSM stories.

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