by Dave1984UK
I don't see why all the hate and terrible rating? Sure it isn't the best story ever written but I very much enjoy it and found it hot!
I have always been of the opinion that if you are not enjoying something don't carry on reading it, which is why I don't understand people complaining so much after 3 pages.
I hope you do carry on writing about your friend as I will keep reading at least
Karl F
I’m enjoying the tale of Kim personally. I understand criticism, but honestly just don’t keep reading. I will. I did some pretty wild things when I was nineteen too, so.... (no buttplug, but...).
(Also... only Anonymous because I can’t seem to get the confirmation code to join in. LoL)
KT
She's still a teenager. That's being used and abused by an old mentor. And they're not married. And he's making her use a butt plug. Not exactly LW stuff. What a mess. A creepy mess. UGH! Don't continue. It isn't worth the time spent to read it.