All Comments on 'The Suburban Mom Pt. 07'

You are maintaining the high standards you set when you embarked on this project. I am very happy that Connor is back in the picture as I get tired of wall to wall lesbian action.

Your characters are well delineated (and not all superhumanly attractive). Your build-ups are uniformly strong and your sex scenes for the most part work very well.

5 stars

“He's still thinking about that fucking communist!”

Love it! Love your work, Alice!

Graphic, funny, well-written - erotic llt at its best!

good job. i was thinking that this would happen but now that it has ,I hope to see it again, maybe he could be the lesbian community's dildo.

This is a smart, satirical take on American small town values that I for one find compelling.

Thanks everyone for your comments. Glad you like Connor, though, Pappasleaze, I think you’re writing a parallel text!

Perfect! The build up, the scheming

by Marcia to a very willing Vesna and Conner, leads to a very hot and steamy session of fucking and pussy licking. The author certainly suggests that there is more to Conner and Vesna's lusts than Marcia thought. I especially liked that the chapter was again told from Marcia's perspective, and her thoughts about the very hot and sexy "communist" really was a contrast to the intensity of the sex. Wonderful writing and I look forward to the next chapter in this tale.

“ She couldn't wait to get upstairs and experience the new Connor for herself. If she could prise him away from his new little friend.”

Love this story.