All Comments on 'The Temp'

Like your writing and first paragraph is good start to adventure that has promise. Yet, what followed seemed so rushed — connecting with Zane and Chris, Roxanne, then Brent followed by Gloria and closing resignation. This reader is out of breath without really getting to know anyone or enjoying any of the abbreviated erotic connections. Very much like you had something on your mind and couldn’t get it out quickly enough. Do hope you continue to share.