All Comments on 'The Thin End of the Wedge - Pt. 01'

Funny how 39 is mature or old. To this guy in 60’s thats a kid!

Nice story but as the characters are written she and george should be 50 plus years old.

looking forward to part of Sally & Toms adventures in The thin wedge

Continue on

Cheers!

Another wasted first effort. Dismal.

What a great first story. Pay NO attention to the jealous assholes who can’t or won’t write anything, but will try and tear you down. I’ve given this one a well deserved five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I thought "Pretty damn good"!! And I loved the British English!! Not sure an American version would be as charming!!

A very hot story. I especially like the dirty talk. Once she realized that she really liked George’s fat cock she quickly began to think of herself as a “slut” and “whore,” and she liked it the feeling. Well written and the dialogue flowed naturally.

OK premise.

But sex is sooooo rushed. Sooooo automatic.

Dialog is stilted.

Sex is MEH.

Two stars.