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by Ravenna_Victoria
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Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI was NOT there!
I did NOT take part!
Therefore there is nothing believable in this 'story'!
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago2nd POV is unfailingly always bad. This is shorter than most such failed efforts, about the only thing good about it.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI liked it
2nd person pov allows me to use my imagination to put myself there
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