All Comments on 'The Unknowing Model, My Wife Ch. 03'

by Brad1996

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LockstepLockstep3 months ago

Great installment, I like the direction this is taking. Adding some more details and increasing the length of the written sex scenes would be nice, otherwise awesome job!

shewantsmoreshewantsmore3 months ago

Brilliant story,his obsession is taking him places and he dont know where it will go between him,his neighbour and his wife

LockstepLockstep3 months ago

Solid installment. I would recommend being more descriptive and longer in the s*x scene descriptions, draw the reader in. I am looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully the husband has the agonize over what happens as he listens to it from some place in the house.

AardieAardie3 months ago

The idiot has groomed her to become the neighbor's slave. Once that is complete, he will no longer be allowed to fuck his own wife and they will both serve him sexually.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

great story knew it would go this way but hubby must find a way out or lose her once fucked by tim time to grow some

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

have tims wife suddenly appear with evidence he's done it before and spoil he's plan to fuck he's neihgbour

carbilz4carbilz43 months ago

Great series. Please keep it going

JairBrasilJairBrasil3 months ago

Very good, Please keep it going

EmmeluringenEmmeluringen3 months ago

This is really hot! It started so innocent, but there is only one way this may go. And both will be really happy when it does!

Keep up the good work!!!

FarmerRon1955FarmerRon19553 months ago

Another great story!! I kept hoping everything was leading up to this. Keep up the good work!!

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Happily married to a sexy wife. I have had some successes in exposing my wife. But I have unfulfilled fantasies that I enjoy writing about.