All Comments on 'The Whoremaker Ch. 06'

by DanielAlexander

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nopenopemaybenopenopemaybeabout 2 months ago

Can't say I'm not enjoying this but I think it would be better if you tried to stay a bit more realistic outside the mindcontrol/demonpowers stuff. That said, it's your story so whatever. It's a fun read either way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good story!

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