All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really want to read more about David with Lewis or Coach - someone he finds attractive and around his age. All these old men make this story seem very manipulative and creepy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You never disappoint, chapter #18 was yet another HOT part of this great ***** story. MLF

spankedpussyboyspankedpussyboyover 1 year ago

You are such a talented writer...so hot...I came 3 times reading this.

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