by Str4ng3rth4nf1ct1on
Yeah, you conveyed the feelings you were having very well indeed. You also managed to alleviate the fears I had about Lewis. And I don't think you ever have to worry about boring anyone, I don't believe that would be possible with this ***** story. It's sometimes touching, frequently intense and always leaves the reading wanting to know what will happen next.
@MarcLuciFer
Thanks for the very kind comments. I’ve never written anything before. I’m sure I’ve made plenty of grammatical errors so I’m really pleased you’re enjoying it.