All Comments on 'This Can’t Be Happening Ch. 23'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer12 months ago

Yeah, you conveyed the feelings you were having very well indeed. You also managed to alleviate the fears I had about Lewis. And I don't think you ever have to worry about boring anyone, I don't believe that would be possible with this ***** story. It's sometimes touching, frequently intense and always leaves the reading wanting to know what will happen next.

Str4ng3rth4nf1ct1onStr4ng3rth4nf1ct1on12 months agoAuthor

@MarcLuciFer

Thanks for the very kind comments. I’ve never written anything before. I’m sure I’ve made plenty of grammatical errors so I’m really pleased you’re enjoying it.

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