All Comments on '‘Til Fate Do They Pt. 05'

Now I finally understood where the problem was for me. I looked up your bio and saw that you are English. Now the puzzle is done for me. I've always heard that the best cuckolds grow in England and the best slut are English married women. Your story proves it to me!

The scores are low because we all understand what a pathetic, low self-esteamed fuckwit the husband is.

Then he just lets the slut wife control and dictate if and when she "allows" her cuck husband to have sex with her. Note: have sex, not make love nor fuck her. It's all about what SHE wants and this dickhead just accepts it.

Only one more after this boys!

Is it a remake of an older story ? The title and general events remind me of something I read a few years back.

Anonymous. Why are you surprised at the low scores? The main character is a total idiot loser. Readers enjoy the stories where they LIKE the characters. The ONLY thing David did that that I enjoyed was to screw Jayne. And he did not even have the balls to let his cheating wife know he had done it. Other than that he should have turned in his man card. I read the whole story today because of the extremely short chapters. I wasted my time. I will likely read the final chapter simply because I like to finish a story when i start one.

If you play with fire, you better have the gonads to put out the damn fire if it gets out of control. Of course, one part of me revels in the Old Guy getting over on the young Beta male who's been completely feminized and gelded by modern culture and a PC education. Hell, when his own wife, who'd been fucking John said no to sex and he meekly acquiesced, I KNEW he was as done as a thin burger forgotten on a too-hot grill. So, yeah... "Go John!"

Well deserved low scores, in point of fact. Couple sadly ruins their marriage, and for what? Mediocre sex, a lot of doubts and hurt feelings? It's just awful, start to finish.

I wish you "authors" and yes, I laugh my fao when I use that moniker for you, could grasp the concept of dumb, emotionless, stupid, vapid, drivel, dumpster fire, horrid, ridiculous, pathetic, bad, crap and just plain shitty when you read this stuff to yourselves.

Remember put a group of monkey in front of a typewriter and they'd eventually write Shakespeare, in this case, as if too often these days in LW, put a limp dicked cuck in front of a word processing app and you'll get pure shit every time. See monkeys will do better than you at some point.

Thanks for your contribution, someone has to occupy the lower end of the bell-shaped curve. God your MC is a pathetic puke.

Happy St. Patrick's Day!

I just knew you'd all love this one. I'm just here to please you.

Really good. This a fun read. Don't stop now!!

Geez, some people spend FAR too much mental energy on a fun read. I like to read things that are out of my normal, which I imagine is why you like to write something out of your normal. THANK YOU again for a fun read.

Paul