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by KnottLynnHardey

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bellamie1235bellamie12356 months ago

This story should have a freaking trigger warning for child sexual abuse.

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit6 months ago

I liked the story, Mia was lovely.

Just didn't like the ending, sorry.

Anna

KnottLynnHardeyKnottLynnHardey6 months agoAuthor

@annalovesit

No need to be sorry, I appreciate the feedback.

My goal was to explore a human time bomb, a person on the edge of losing control. I too love Mia, but from inception she wasn't meant to have a happy ending.

FleshorFantasyFleshorFantasy6 months ago

Incredible. I enjoyed it so much I will read it several times, some slower than others. Bravo!

ipreferoralipreferoral6 months ago

A crazy emotional ride. On a "technical" note, the "kiss" of the throat is a great description. Well done.

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Knott Lynn Hardey writes psychological themed character driven erotica. Concepts of self-exploration, indulging desires, moral ambiguity and self-discovery are explored in the medium of filthy dirty sex. Feel free to join Knott Lynn Hardey at Patreon to support the continued s...