- Mind Control
- Tinted Shades
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"Shit, he did it again." Frankie said.
"So who is this guy?" Susan said as she stood up and got out of the pool. Frankie joined her and started to towel off her hot body.
"Well, let me tell you..."
THE END?
- COMMENTS
RanDog0256 months agoToo much time spent editing so I can listen to the story with Text Aloud. Going let you go Moose Tales. Still I gave you a good score but not following any longer. You write good stories just sensationalize way too much for your readers. If you wrote like BurntRedStone, well, that's something no one else cam do. See ya!
Master_Doctor7 months agoThe story was good, It wasnt the norm. Which is good. over all it was great but really could use a proof read or edit.
kid97 months agogood read. im glad your back hope this has stopped your writers block and we get more stories from you
