All Comments on 'Together At Last - Hungry'

by L A Field

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goodshoes2goodshoes2over 2 years ago

Great---keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I wouldn’t say that this story is badly written, but it isn’t romance. Are Alicia and James in love with each other, or do they just have a powerful physical attraction? The only evidence in the story is for physical attraction. If they do love each other, it would be interesting to know why.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
great romance story

This is the first part of a great love story, beautifully written by the author. Strong characters and an engaging plot within the context of a marvelous romantic atmosphere make this a five stars story.

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