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Anonymousalmost 11 years agoWould shine with an editor's help
Typos.
Continuity errors. First no kitchen, then there is a kitchen?
Room service knocked on door. Second visitor rang doorbell: "heard doorbells ring a second time."
"sub", for submissive, is not to be capitalized.
Missing word, incorrect words.
These are distracting, making it difficult to read and enjoy the story.
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Darkwatch@DarkwatchDomme female, 50 years old. Used to have two males in my stable, now have my main sub and a female pet. It's good to be a Domme!
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