by CharlieB4
Well done and well played great development of players and great story telling. 5 stars and ready for more. Cheers
A fun read, and I like the slow burn of where this could be headed. I gave you 4 stars for the brevity and the 3 misspelled words (e.g., one 'there' should have been 'their' and one 'it's' should have been 'its'), but you're definitely a fine writer, and you had my cock dripping. I also appreciate your explaining what the Australian hat name is in another of your stories--I think it was what Christopher George's character wore on "The Rat Patrol" way back in the day. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter, and I hope Zac has the innocent wife eventually doing all sorts of nasty things that she wouldn't normally do with her husband (i.e., swallowing cum, anal, etc.). Cheers!
Great 2nd chapter! This is one of those where I know I'm going to read all of it, with all of the "What if it was MY wife?" thoughts & anxieties. And I may hate it that I love it, but that's what a good cuckold/hotwife/swap story should do! Keep it up!
I'll guess that the new homeowner's marriage is doomed just like the previous owner of their home.
Fantastic story, I like the style and the plot, hope they dont end up like other couple and there will be happy end story, she became happy hotwife and he happy cuckold. Keep writing!