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DuleighDuleighabout 1 year ago

Very nice

BTW - Readers - this story comes out to 750 words + an 8 word intro, I am not sure why the web site claims it's 736 words. It would have been rejected by the algorithm if it wasn't at least 750 words

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveabout 1 year ago

Well written and heartfelt.

chytownchytownabout 1 year ago

💕!!!!!!!!!HALLELUJAH!!!!!!!💕 Thanks for sharing. Can we cut the cake now?

holliday1960holliday1960about 1 year ago

Unique and an ingenious way of coloring within the lines. Great job, Dave. Carry on.

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor8 months ago

I liked this. Easy 5 stars

Campus77Campus777 months ago

I only started reading your tales. Hopefully there is a continuation of this fantasy. So much development is possible.

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