by Hedocpl
As the author I reserve the option of deleting negative feedback. If you leave it, I’ll delete it. Just read and enjoy. If not move on. I get it there are members with what they perceive to be a doctorate in English and are inclined to critique grammar, punctuation, spelling and style rather than reading for what the site is for, erotic enjoyment. I’m not a published author with an editorial staff. Get over yourself.