All Comments on 'Ultra-Girl vs. Mezmira'

by DarkBetrayal

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Lich LordLich Lordalmost 17 years ago
Cool story

I really liked it, but since it was so breast orientated (which is my most favorite form of orientation) I wish you would have had some tit-fucking in it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
So Hot!!

Love your stories. Keep them coming. Really enjoyed this breast focus as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
So Hot!!

Love your stories. Keep them coming. Really enjoyed this breast focus as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
love your stories....

Keep 'em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great

Great story, the seduction here was especially good.

SaphineSaphineover 16 years ago
sorry but no.

breast hypnosis...rape murder, blood gore yea but breast hypnosis...the story was great tho.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Thanks for this good story!!!

You really deserve a big thanks for this story! I hope you'll continue it, maybe a second part where Ultra Girl will be more humiliated???

I like your writing style and how you lead the story and the superheroes fall, congratulation!

verbicideverbicidealmost 13 years ago
only two problems...

...it wasn't erotic or terrifying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Penis

LONG LIVE SATAN!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Not Shitting....

Good and an intersting ending it's just the dilog to it cold be improved to say the least, and as for the humer... let's just say........it's shit. NOT FUNNY DUMB ASS!!!!! but forunally it's just good enough to read

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