by DarkBetrayal
Good and an intersting ending it's just the dilog to it cold be improved to say the least, and as for the humer... let's just say........it's shit. NOT FUNNY DUMB ASS!!!!! but forunally it's just good enough to read
You really deserve a big thanks for this story! I hope you'll continue it, maybe a second part where Ultra Girl will be more humiliated???
I like your writing style and how you lead the story and the superheroes fall, congratulation!
breast hypnosis...rape murder, blood gore yea but breast hypnosis...the story was great tho.
Love your stories. Keep them coming. Really enjoyed this breast focus as well.
Love your stories. Keep them coming. Really enjoyed this breast focus as well.
I really liked it, but since it was so breast orientated (which is my most favorite form of orientation) I wish you would have had some tit-fucking in it.