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"Yeah, he's funny!" Julia giggled.
"He is," John agreed. "He is Julia's father, so one day your mother and I went to see him and asked if we could name you after his daughter. It was a very hard decision for him; he loved her just as much as I love you. So the reason I brought you here today is to introduce you to Julia, your namesake," he said, turning his head towards her headstone. Watching how his daughter was studying it, he knew she couldn't read it, yet she needed to know regardless; what came next left him flabbergasted and very teary-eyed.
"Big Bird!" Julia said spontaneously as she peered back at her father.
The End.
- COMMENTS
01Timber6725 days agoGreat awesome story 5⭐️ overall, yet there were a few things that made it almost a lower grade.
It just came across that Wanda was dying to get into Janis pants to were it seems they were going to hook up with each other. And leave Annie and Johnny behind, the school part was not even part of the storyline, just Johnny being bullied for being different, and causing him and Janis stress.
So what is “Big Bird” at the end ???? There’s no reference for it in the story
Anoniemous4 months agoGreat story, this part exceptionally long but fascinating. No rose coloured spectacles here with John's op and its aftermath. A few threads left incomplete and some text and name issues but nothing to detract fro a great story.
Gadf775 months agoThis is so good I read it again ! A couple of things I want to mention is that you changed the second name for the MC's daughter. Earlier it was gonna be Julia Sophia and later it became Julia Anders. Which is her namesake's last name. Also, you named her Juliet at some point. Plus there are a number of spelling mistakes and forgotten words too.
PhoenixLore19815 months agoWhen dealing with DID there is always going to be a struggle overall this wasn't a bad series though some of the things said doesn't go with the plot of the story so it wasn't very realistic However it is a fiction story as far as the seizures goes honestly while it is a medical condition it could also be his brain trying to heal itself with it still happening even being on medication to control them and it happening out of the blue sometimes for no reason could be a sign of the brain trying to heal itself it just depends on things now Rather that is the case in this story more than likely not just by what the writer said at different times in the series but in reality that is a possibility
Gadf776 months agoWow. Very well written. You had my emotions all over the place. So thanks for the great and lengthy read 😭😊👍.
Anonymous9 months agoI've held off doing any comments until I had reached the end of this very entertaining story . I thoroughly enjoyed the whole story line from start to finish and I hope that I get to read another one like this from you again . As I said EXCELLENT story and thank you .
Mfkndragon12 months ago@zfanboy1 there is always going to be a struggle when dealing with multiple personalities that can never be helped no matter what you do I myself deal with it every day having multiple personalities is different from having a damaged brain while yes johnny brain was damaged at points in the story it wasn't damaged beyond repair for as I stated the brain will heal itself having 2 personalities is something every human has but not show within everyone it takes a traumatic event to show something which johnny went through then add when the brain starts to repair it self it basically opens a gate way that allows the other personalities to come to the forefront that will countue to happen until the brain is fully healed which could take many many years depending the extent of the damage done to the brain
Mfkndragon12 months agoOk you for the most part fixed your issue that had me up in arms from the first story in the set however it's pretty clear you didn't do a deep dive into the full medical process of the brain which honestly I don't blame you much there cause damn that's a process even for doctors lol however ones brain cells are never completely damaged beyond repair as I stated before when the brain is so damaged that it seems it can't be repaired by modern medicine and tools it will start to heal itself like a muscle will do after it has been broken the brain does the same for that's what a brain is for the most it's a muscle the strongest in the human body other than that you turned into a decent story
01Timber67about 1 year agoIncredible story of the ups and downs in the life of Johnny… I believe someone was cutting up onions at various points in this story.
I am just glad that you finished it on a good note,, thank you
