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"Yeah, he's funny!" Julia giggled.
"He is," John agreed. "He is Julia's father, so one day your mother and I went to see him and asked if we could name you after his daughter. It was a very hard decision for him; he loved her just as much as I love you. So the reason I brought you here today is to introduce you to Julia, your namesake," he said, turning his head towards her headstone. Watching how his daughter was studying it, he knew she couldn't read it, yet she needed to know regardless; what came next left him flabbergasted and very teary-eyed.
"Big Bird!" Julia said spontaneously as she peered back at her father.
The End.
- COMMENTS
Anoniemous3 months agoGreat story, this part exceptionally long but fascinating. No rose coloured spectacles here with John's op and its aftermath. A few threads left incomplete and some text and name issues but nothing to detract fro a great story.
Gadf774 months agoThis is so good I read it again ! A couple of things I want to mention is that you changed the second name for the MC's daughter. Earlier it was gonna be Julia Sophia and later it became Julia Anders. Which is her namesake's last name. Also, you named her Juliet at some point. Plus there are a number of spelling mistakes and forgotten words too.
PhoenixLore19814 months agoWhen dealing with DID there is always going to be a struggle overall this wasn't a bad series though some of the things said doesn't go with the plot of the story so it wasn't very realistic However it is a fiction story as far as the seizures goes honestly while it is a medical condition it could also be his brain trying to heal itself with it still happening even being on medication to control them and it happening out of the blue sometimes for no reason could be a sign of the brain trying to heal itself it just depends on things now Rather that is the case in this story more than likely not just by what the writer said at different times in the series but in reality that is a possibility
Gadf775 months agoWow. Very well written. You had my emotions all over the place. So thanks for the great and lengthy read 😭😊👍.
Anonymous8 months agoI've held off doing any comments until I had reached the end of this very entertaining story . I thoroughly enjoyed the whole story line from start to finish and I hope that I get to read another one like this from you again . As I said EXCELLENT story and thank you .
