Unbelievable Pt. 10

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"Yeah, he's funny!" Julia giggled.

"He is," John agreed. "He is Julia's father, so one day your mother and I went to see him and asked if we could name you after his daughter. It was a very hard decision for him; he loved her just as much as I love you. So the reason I brought you here today is to introduce you to Julia, your namesake," he said, turning his head towards her headstone. Watching how his daughter was studying it, he knew she couldn't read it, yet she needed to know regardless; what came next left him flabbergasted and very teary-eyed.

"Big Bird!" Julia said spontaneously as she peered back at her father.

The End.

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albertaboyalbertaboy7 days ago

That was a hell of a story, wow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Nicely done.

AnoniemousAnoniemous3 months ago

Great story, this part exceptionally long but fascinating. No rose coloured spectacles here with John's op and its aftermath. A few threads left incomplete and some text and name issues but nothing to detract fro a great story.

Gadf77Gadf773 months ago

This is so good I read it again ! A couple of things I want to mention is that you changed the second name for the MC's daughter. Earlier it was gonna be Julia Sophia and later it became Julia Anders. Which is her namesake's last name. Also, you named her Juliet at some point. Plus there are a number of spelling mistakes and forgotten words too.

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