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by m011z2016

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Far too transactional. He did this. It drove her crazy. She did that. It drove him crazy. She had many orgasms. It felt really good.

This reads like an IKEA instruction manual. No passion, no excitement, no nothing.

muskyboymuskyboy5 months ago

I liked the story but it really needed a lot more dialogue.

wwaldripwwaldrip6 months ago

Really enjoyed reading your story.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

The title says fantasy. What fantasy?

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New to writing stories. Thanks for your honest feedback.