All Comments on 'Vacation Impregnation Fantasy'

The title says fantasy. What fantasy?

Really enjoyed reading your story.

I liked the story but it really needed a lot more dialogue.

Far too transactional. He did this. It drove her crazy. She did that. It drove him crazy. She had many orgasms. It felt really good.

This reads like an IKEA instruction manual. No passion, no excitement, no nothing.