All Comments on 'Valentine's Dance'

by Duleigh

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rflikeslitrflikeslitover 1 year ago

Again.. Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

in the third paragraph you told us twice they were engaged

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I was not going to read this story after reading the blurb. But I began and could not quit. Fun. Sexy.. Unconventional. You’ll be forgiven for not knowing Saville Row Dinner Suits, (they would not call them Tuxedos,) do not cost $1,000.00. More like $3,000.00 off the rack, $8,000.00 Bespoke. That makes the impact of the effect even better. Fit is everything…ask Lanh.

BobbyBrandtBobbyBrandtover 1 year ago

Thanks. Good luck with the contest

dmallorddmallordover 1 year ago

This is a masterfully written story. So rich in content and cultural background that it must only be rated as outstanding well beyond any five-point scale. Thanks for a wonderful read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

interesting story line... but glasses only "frost" over when going from cold to warm.

DuleighDuleighover 1 year agoAuthor

Sorry Anonymous, I lived in North Dakota for 20 years and Buffalo for 26 Going from a hot, humid kitchen or gym to -30 degrees frosts over your glasses quite well

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent addition to the whole series. Vv good storytelling with enjoyable plot.

Please keep going with these characters.

Campus77Campus775 months ago

A good addon to the story line.

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Disabled veteran, learning how to live from the sidelines. Still trying to figure out if I'm writing these stories, or if these stories are writing me. I've given them free rein to flow and now it's time to start publishing, The scores reflect that you like what I am publishin...

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