Verity's in Love Ch. 04

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"Did she tell you that?"

"Yes she did, she told me all the bullshit about the magazine and how it nearly fucked your marriage. She said you really helped her understand the shitty world she was in. I want to thank you, man, for that."

"We both had the same problem really. A shared experience I suppose."

"So you will be coming to our wedding?"

"Wouldn't miss it."

"Fleur and I talked about this. We are planning to have a family and would love you and Verity to be God parents."

"Wow, I am honoured. I'm sure Verity will agree."

"Well that's settled. Just one condition; when you come to the wedding. Don't mention the last tour. The lads can get a little testy."

Epilogue

In pride of place in their home is a large photograph of Stephen and Verity's 're --marriage party', the pakeha whanau. Stephen would often pause when passing. Each one of the party had some role in helping Verity and Stephen through those difficult times, took risks, sometimes made mistakes but at each turn of events there was someone there to help and support them. Each continued to look to each other's back as they had for Verity and Stephen.

Verity and Stephen's new additions, little Leda, Rachael and Fleur were lucky enough to join Hugo and Amos in having the most fabulous loving global and diverse whanau with so many Uncles and Aunties contributing to birthdays and Christmases and wonderful holidays.

And Stephen, yes Fleur commissioned him for three houses. And who scored the interiors, well Verity of course. But Verity also got the interior s for her London and Paris apartments.

Verity never looked back. Life had its ups and down but her new babies never brought a relapse of post-natal depression. Yes, she is writing again and very determined at it, having undertaken a further course in creative writing. Her fantasy world is now firmly embedded in her stories. There is one novel, however, one about a woman caught up in a fauxmance. Will there be a Booker Prize?

Maybe, we'll see.

Oh, and Marcus. He visits regularly; he is on the cricket commentating circuit these days. Stephen and Marcus try to catch up as much as possible; and the informal coaching that Hugo and Amos get helps to improve their game immeasurably. The next question is what to do about the girl's cricketing future?


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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Verity never did say she loved Stephen

She did say it easily to Brad! Very long and unfulfilling

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Co za śmieci. Kolejny osioł, który jest bez jąder

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

How did rachael go from being desperately worried about her marriage in the last chapter to being a life long bachelorette in this chapter?

moultonknobmoultonknobalmost 2 years ago

Far too long and boring and then he finished up with the woman who obviously never loved him the first time they were married. Just another wimpy twat story with American spelling in what was supposed to be New Zealand. All things considered just a load of crap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A nice story about female Playstation2s. The author might be ready for female playstation3s and someday a PS5 or even a female PC with many more options for the female with pseudo AI abilities to make and suffer the consequences of the interpersonal simulations.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

They pretty much need that many words to pretend the woman wasn't capable of making the decision to defecate on him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Convoluted and more than a little boring.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You Stephen, just forget all this shit, go back to Verity, eat humble pie and rejoin the human race. Do you have the guts for that?

This sort of shit can only be made up by authors who have been cucks their whole life and consider it an honour to justify a Romans extramarital affairs … however pathetic they may be!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
An excellent ending ...

... to an excellent series.

Well done!

PencarrowPencarrowabout 3 years ago
WELL, I LIKED IT

In response to 26thNC, perhaps it was too Kiwi with the inclusion of Maori terms, the All Blacks and other things we kiwis are very familiar with, but remember that the vast bulk of stories on Literotica are penned by writers from the USA and those of us outside of that part of the world have to submerge ourselves in football stars, cheerleaders, proms, guns (my god, so many stories with guns) and the huge range of Americana from the most exotic nation on earth. This is not a bad thing because we all learn a little of how the rest of the world works and thinks.

I'm not usually a fan of RAAC, especially after what Verity did, but I thought Rakiura did a good job of turning it all around. Her depression and obvious tenuous grip on reality provided a reason for her behavior, and I thought the progression to reconciliation and eventual marriage was believable.

Some other parts of the story were more implausible, but I was carried along with it all without questioning it too much. Well done, Rakiura, and thanks for writing it.

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