All Comments on 'Virgin, Slave, Nanny, Lover Pt. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well again an other brilliant chapter and of course the the last sentence made me - and I guess many more readers - eaven more curious for the next one to come (soon I hope) - plase continue as You did so fare - Thanks ... Jtl

Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
A Five Star Story That Just Gets Better

We love drama, always added fun. This just gets better and better and Alan does need time to serve a nice male male couple. He needs to learn what his action have caused others. That is just good entertainment for the readers. Well written and great story telling . Keep pushing the limits and let the story rock on and have Alan enjoy all the slave benefits. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another 5 star chapter. I do hope he will not be there three months but a couple of weeks. I was hoping that Aneu would be controlling him even to the point of sexual nature and doing it all in front of Rocio, as well as Diana. also Diana would make be with others as well as using her crop. but what you done here was great. I do hope Aneu gets a little chance to perfect her dominance.

Pappasleaze!

Ravey19Ravey197 months ago

Thought it was getting too late to sort it out and so it appears. Excellent writing.

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I am no longer writing for Lit, instead I am working with Gortmundy to help prepare his magnum opus ‘The Tattooed Woman’ for publication and working on finishing my sci-fi novel, Kyrielle. If anyone is interested in being a beta reader for Kyrielle please let me know. The fir...