All Comments on 'Virtual Reality Pt. 02'

You used to be a good writer. What happened?

I like the start to this story, though longer chapters would be greatly appreciated. I'd rather wait a few days longer and have a bigger chapter to read than a a chapter this short every (couple) days 😁

I like the start to this story, though longer chapters would be greatly appreciated. I'd rather wait a few days longer and have a bigger chapter to read than a a chapter this short every (couple) days 😁

THIS is what you give us? How the mighty have fallen...you good bro?

I hope this fantasy goes better than reality.

Love your previous work, so I'm interested to see where you take this. Maybe don't post again until you have enough pages for some sex, though, as crude as that sounds, unless there isn't going to be any at all.

maybe combine more chapters before you post them...

TBH part 1 and 2 should have been in one chapter, these are way too short as is.

I love the story so far, can’t wait for more, don’t be afraid to post more, just like the others I wish they were a little longer.

I think there should be another chapter where the identity of Noralmim is revealed.

It would be disappointing if it turns out to be Max the bully

it is promising to be one of your greatest work.. reading it again ... but then you havent wrote anything after this.. why? hope you are doing good...

That's it what happens next