All Comments on 'War and Pleasure Pt. 01'

Unfortunately, this POV choice is very putting for many readers, and certain to not work for roughly have of them (assuming a 50/50 split of male/female readers). Good chance given the nature of this site, it's actually well under 50% will read this as it's intended, as a female reader.

In a way I agree the previous commenter's remarks. I did a little research on 2nd person, and with that knowledge I'm going to re-read it.

The author might be wondering why I'm going to such lengths...and it's because it's a wonderful story. Lots of love and it definitely made me hot. I do hope he extends the series, I'd like to spend the weekend with that couple.