All Comments on 'We Give Up Control Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the storyline until they went to a club in their own town. No one is going to do that as a submissive person and get degraded in front of people they may work with or family. And then I really didn't like it when it went from non-con where the people get forced to do something that they really secretly want to do, to where they are beaten, raped, abused and drugged. That was a strange ending that I could have been fine without reading.

ReaperKingUltraReaperKingUltraover 2 years ago

Great story but it kinda took a very dark turn at the end was quite shocked to read that part kinda of a guilty read not my favorite chapter but good chapter was actually hoping Anthony would force the mom and son to fuck each other as part of Tracy's revenge scheme they had so little interaction was hoping for more build up and interaction between the 2 but oh well good story overall

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Former military, semi-serious writer. Published a few stories on Amazon as Twisted Dave. I tend to write non-consent/reluctance, took a trip into a romance story, dabble in incest stories and willing to try other genres. I use my writing as a way to cope with everyday stress. ...

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