All Comments on 'What Happens at the Lake... Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story so gar! Hoping to see this continued even further

Ilovetophoto68Ilovetophoto68about 2 months ago

Don't stop now!!!. Loved parts 1 and 2. Ready for part 3 and 4.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

What a way to finally fall in love with someone you've always loved. How cool would it be for him to propose to her? Even though not legally, have their own ceremony after convincing mom & dad of their intentions, have them be maid of honor & best man. The bride & groom can go on their honeymoon & start procreating. Maybe even end up swapping with mom & dad. Just throwing that out there. Chapter 3 please. 5☆

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 2 months ago

Nice build up to what I hope will be some hot sexy times between these two. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I’m loving the way this story is unfolding, I hope some of it really did happen in real life. It also takes me back thirty years in time to when I was 18 and my sister was 20… hot memories. The sashaying hips, the pussy flashes, etc. yep, it all rings so true!

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